I have many favorite things I like about myself. First, my favorite thing about myself is that I am kind. I love to help others, such as: with homework. I like my sociability, so I make friends easily. Right now, I have many friends at Webb. One of my favorite skills is how fast I can memorize when I study. I usually finish preparing to study for subject like history and English earlier than other classmates. I do not have professional sports skills, but I am good at most sports such as: soccer, baseball, basketball, table tennis and tennis. Also because of Korean culture, I have learned to respect older people. I really respect my teachers. Many teacher trust and like me. Especially, Mrs. Berzinskas, my favorite teacher, said that she likes my kindness. Many friends tell me their secrets because they know that I do not tell their secrets to others. Finally, the most favorite thing about myself is self-sufficiency. I always try to find own my way, take care of myself and build for my future life. My favorite things are kindness, sociability, memorization, good sports skills, respect of others, keeping secrets, and self- sufficiency.
You definitely are kind, a good quality to have! Come see me, and I will help you fix this!
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